Words to uplift, encourage, and provoke.
Nice write. Emotional and heavy.
A very nice idea, a touch too literal.
In a word, intriguing...
Yes, the mask must fall
You have hit truth about the nature of masks. Even though it becomes debilitating to hide our true selves, it is difficult and painful to discard the mask. Excelent!
Oh... nice! We went in similar directions with this, although not exact. I love how this flows and the story it conveys.
Full of emotions... lovely!
Theres always another Mask ....or maybe a cable guy, at least
Candid thoughts. Even if one tries to stretch the mask and don it , ultimately the fake facade will crack and fall with a thud.
very insightful poem.
when a fake mask becomes your identity then taking it off is also painful,Ashamed
"I've grown a mask as large as the world"Love that line; it reads like the beginning of a novel I would want to read all the way to the end.
eventually we all have to give it up. thankfully, the tears leave with it