Tuesday, May 27

In the Act

I do the dishes,
slowly passing the glass plate
under the stream of water,
The water pours-
a tiny storm in my sink.
A sound at the door,
A shadow falls on me
I'm caught making love again.

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11 comments:

  1. The water pours-
    a tiny storm in my sink... ah that, and the last line, I'm caught making love again... very romantic; makes me wonder, was the person making love behind her partner's back? leaves a lot of questions... nice

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  2. hey,
    doing the dishes in my house leads to making love.
    so i dont mind be caught doing them.

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  3. That last line caught me with surprise... Brian's comment made is one interpretation.

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  4. Dishes hey...you can always get caught with a storm in your sink! Cool write!

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  5. The ending was unexpected but hey its a good thing, smiles ~

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  6. hmm..makes me wonder whom you were doing dishes with or for?
    interesting write as it leaves a few questions lingering in the sink..

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  7. Very clever and sensitive writing. Nice!

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  8. Hmm...my space out and get away is at the sink with this mesmerizing pour of water and yes, sometimes...it's like making love in a way. I enjoyed this.

    I have a serenity cling sticker...a small one on the window and on the sill, a periwinkle shell, stone and a little cube with the image of prayer hands encapsulated in it...yes, dishes is a place for love where I am.

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  9. Brilliantly done, this one - smiles.

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  10. Like the storm in the sink and the reverie.

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  11. Very interesting how the build up ended in such wonderful happenings. Great write Charleen!

    Hank

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