Thursday, January 2

Baby Unborn











6 comments:

  1. "when passions mix and I'm alive...." even being able to articulate that shows that day is here! Great write. I like the realizations at the end of what you have. Nice that your mom is a blessing in your life. Yay for moms!

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  2. the last three lines say it all...great write up :)

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  3. oh this made me happy... and sad... no mom to go to any longer... I think she needs my lap nowadays.

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  4. Oh that's Heartbreaking! Great work.

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  5. Feeling of aliveness, however it happens, is a gift indeed!

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  6. This poem evoked in me a Jungian sentiment. Specifically that search of the Eden lost at birth. Anyway you seem quite alive to me already to be able to write like this.

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