Sunday, May 5

Dead Chrysanthemum

Dead chrysanthemum
A memory of last week
When you were still here



Shared at http://chevrefeuillescarpediem.blogspot.com/

5 comments:

  1. this one reminds me of my 'mum'...It's been more than a week (actually 7 years), but the memories are sharp, and I quote her 'mumisms' daily...

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  2. oh yes.. sadness is tightly coupled to wilted flowers.

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  3. Wonderfully composed on the haiku by Kyoshi. Thank you for sharing.

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  4. memories can be painful and lasting

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  5. Wow. This was neat writing. I love this style using repetition!

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