Thursday, April 18


This is the Haiku from which I draw inspiration:

tacos in our hands
we sit and chat for hours
in a Wendy's lot

This is the New Haiku:

midnight dates are gone
you study hard while I sleep
work drives us forward

Shared at http://chevrefeuillescarpediem.blogspot.com/



6 comments:

  1. Awesome haiku Charleen ... I sense the joy of late night talks in that first one ... and I feel the loss of those precious chats in the one you wrote inspired on the one you choose.

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  2. beautiful lines.Smiles:)God<3u

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  3. on to the next phase of life
    dealing with the tasks at hand

    nicely crafted

    Cheers!
    JzB

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  4. I too feel the loneliness in your inspired haiku. Well done.

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  5. A progression there,to the more serious..

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  6. beautiful lines... i have that type of memories too.

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