Words to uplift, encourage, and provoke.
Great poem. You've really brought out a deeper story that lies behind the picture. And such a contrast what she thinks of as looking around her, and what he thinks of looking at her. Bravo!
Wonderfully put...patterns don't free us
I like the simplicity; it so matches the ambiance of the picture.
Smart and snappy writing...
very lovely!!..how deluded we are at times!!
Clever approach. Succinct, with nothing left unsaid.
A compact style and she clearly is a great romanticist!!
The ways of the world well captured.
Quintessential first date...
Twas ever thus, as my Dad used to say...
This is awesome"he saw beyond her clothes" I love it haha
Yes, it does often seem that is the way a man and a woman's dreams and emotions come about! Very nice.
Men and women are often not on the same page in their thoughts. Well written and pithy!
Such a wonderful story within