Saturday, May 1

Blue

Blue
the expanse of the ocean
the expanse of the sky
a cool blue stone beneath it all
the wind ripping through you
a sleep that engulfs you
peace is also blue
smooth as silk on your tongue
the metallic twinge of silver
so cold, is that blue
a silent winter
filled with loneliness
that quiet, almost indistinguishable sound
just drown in that hue of blue

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5 comments:

  1. Hues of blue is always forgiving and peaceful, just as much as red will cause conflicts! Nicely Charleen!

    Hank

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  2. This is so calm and etheral, beautiful!

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  3. I am a big fan of a big role for color in poetry and this is as a big a role as it gets. You wrapped us in a blanket of blue and I believe no one will walk away unaffected by the tone. Great work.

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  4. Drown in that hue of blue... too many people do, don't they? Well done.

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